A condensed speck of matter begot from a giant explode
With skies,waters and land that made a wonderful abode
Journeyed around the burning sun through day and night
Holding a treasure called life with all its heart and might
Eons back in its kingdom a little cell with a spark arose
Wonder what good goad did God have,for this he chose
Green planktons bred,fishes swam and insects crawled
White birds soared,reptiles slithered and frogs croaked
Mighty dinosaurs lived and tramped with all their pride
Ivory tusks of mammoths not under any fossils did hide
Every blood and seed grew with a hundred heaven's hue
For from cradle to grave was a bond of kinship truly true
He left not a fruit or grass,a bone or meat after his feast
Now scraped and sucked is its tiny terrain and fiery core
Bereft of fear he still does ask“Is there anything more?”
Is his rule,for this problem will he try and find a solution?
Or sleep in a fathomless darkness of his self made abyss?
Hope he remembers,not surviving but sharing is a bliss!
-R-
PS: This poem is written as a part of Poetry Potluck-Evolution,Environment And Survival at Jingle Poetry.
15 comments:
awesome...cannot say anything more... too good...
cheers!
SUB
perfect just like life before humans enter into the picture. Sad but we're part of it but hopefully it's not too late to make it beautiful once again...yes to bliss :)
I think we have to work smarter to keep our planet going. We are far too wasteful.
Beutiful poetry with the strong imagery capturing evolition nicely.
awesome reflection on planet earth.
welcome,
Happy Potluck.
A++
good one.. best of luck for the pot luck..!
How long can we say, Survival of the fittest?!
The pic is so aptly chosen and elegant :)
@SUB: Thank you so much!
@bendedspoon:Yeah everything was perfect before we entered in:(
@poetsenvy: I agree!
@The Fool: Glad you liked it:)
@Jingle: Thanks Jingle!
@Raghu: Thanks!
@Beyond Horizon: Yeah me liked the pic too:)Thats why its here:)
Wonderful poem!!
You have given words to a billion years!!
Like an artist's brush,you painted with your words !
@Vyankatesh: Thank you:)
@dr.antony: That was a kind analogy:)Thank you!
Hope he remembers,not surviving but sharing is a bliss!Interesting Input.Liked it!
@UmaAnandane: Thank you,glad that you did:)
Am in love... again (there's my song)
@chandru.ar: And so am I :-D
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