I dream of a cold summer night
When the stars shall shine
Like your baby eyes
And hide behind
Those clouds
In spite
I dream of a warm winter day
When the sun shall burn
Like your silly love
And hide behind
Those hills
In sulk
I dream of the time in between
When you shall hold me
Under the white quilt
Near and forever
And whisper
"Just dream..."
14 comments:
Sweet like a dream. Your words sound so warm and cuddly. That pic is so cute :)
cute,
love the shape.
perfect wording...
I love the last stanza :)
enjoy the potluck!
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@Sh@s: Thank you:)Welcome to the blog:)
@Jingle Thank you:)
@lynnaima: Thats my favorite too:)
dreams are gooood ... We can only fulfill our desires if we dream :)
lovely poem
Bikram's
Oh a shape poem and such a lovely one at that, enjoyed the last stanza vey much.
Oh, such a cuuuuuuute picture and a dreamy poem. Love it!
How well you write !
I love the form. Adorable poem and picture =) Elegantly written
aww...Just dream R...and May it come True ;)
Loved two cute teddy :)
Lovely one..
such a short and yet poignant poem. did u win?
bright and impressive words.
keep it up.
join poets rally today.
we love your talent.
xoxox
@Everyone above this comment: Thank you for the kind words:)
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