Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Just Dream

I dream of a cold summer night
When the stars shall shine
Like your baby eyes
And hide behind
Those clouds
In spite

I dream of a warm winter day
When the sun shall burn
Like your silly love
And hide behind
Those hills
In sulk

I dream of the time in between
When you shall hold me
Under the white quilt
Near and forever
And whisper
"Just dream..."



Sh@s said...

Sweet like a dream. Your words sound so warm and cuddly. That pic is so cute :)

Jingle said...

love the shape.
perfect wording...

Anonymous said...

I love the last stanza :)
enjoy the potluck!


Raksha Bhat said...

@Sh@s: Thank you:)Welcome to the blog:)

@Jingle Thank you:)

@lynnaima: Thats my favorite too:)

Bikramjit said...

dreams are gooood ... We can only fulfill our desires if we dream :)

lovely poem


Butterflies of time said...

Oh a shape poem and such a lovely one at that, enjoyed the last stanza vey much.

Anonymous said...

Oh, such a cuuuuuuute picture and a dreamy poem. Love it!

dr.antony said...

How well you write !

Anonymous said...

I love the form. Adorable poem and picture =) Elegantly written

Beyond Horizon said...

aww...Just dream R...and May it come True ;)
Loved two cute teddy :)

Raghu said...

Lovely one..

Anonymous said...

such a short and yet poignant poem. did u win?

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

bright and impressive words.
keep it up.

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we love your talent.

Raksha Bhat said...

@Everyone above this comment: Thank you for the kind words:)